Feedback on pitch

In todays lesson we had to present out pitches to the class. This was done so that we could get feedback off our class and teacher. This was done so that we can improve our idea or add additional aspects to our pitch. The feedback that I got was really beneficial for me as I had more ideas for my actual magazine and had a clear idea of what I can add with the feedback from my class.

This is the feedback from the class and my Lecturer.