Feedback on Front cover, Article and Billboard

I handed my work in to get marked and to allow my teacher to give me feedback. The notes that I received were that I needed to work on my fonts and changing images.

Class feedback 14.12.15

This is the feedback that I received from my class, they added two aspects that they liked and one aspect that they think could have been improved.

Review 09.12.15

This is where I am with my front cove, article and billboard pages. I still need to make improvements and changes.

Review 14.12.15

This is the contents page of my magazine, I still have improvement to do and aspects to change. I will also ask my teacher to mark and asses it so that I can make it the best I can.

Target 14.12.15

Today I want to get as much as I can completed. Including my contents page.

Target 09.12.15

Today I want to complete my billboard and contents page.

Review 07.12.15

This is where I am with my contents page. I still need to make progress with it and add new elements into it.

Target 07.12.15

Today I want to progress with my contents page and start my webdsite.

November overview

This is my calendar for November . I set the review for my first piece of work which was my article page. I wanted to hand it in so that I could get the right feedback on what I needed to improve. I have a lot of improvement on my feedback I wanted to document them on my blog to show the progress that I have made.

Review 25.11.15

This is another draft of my coursework that I have changed after the feedback that I received on my original work.

Review 30.11.15

I did start my billboard but on reflection I aaas not happy with the overall look of the billboard so I have decided to start again.

Target 30.11.15

Today I want to make sure that I get as much as I can completed and get my content and billboard page complete.

Target 25.11.15

I want to complete my front cover and article page.

Review 23.11.15

This is my first draft of my first cover.

Target 23.11.15

Today I want to try and get my front cover completed and handed in to be marked for the first time.

Review 18.11.15

This is the start of my front cover

Review 16.11.15

As you can see I have made changes to my article page from the feedback that received.

Target 18.11.15

Today I want to complete my article page and start my front cover.

Feedback on 1st draft of article

This is the feedback that I received on my first draft of my article draft.

Target 16.11.15

Today I want to make sure that all of my blog is up to date. Also I want to improve my article page with the feedback that I received.

Article Draft

This is my article draft that  created so that I could show that I understood what an article draft is. This article is based upon stottie cakes, I have now decided to not focus on this when creating my magazine but focus on a different article topic.

Review 11.11.15

This is the next stage to my article, I have handed into get marked by my teacher.

Calendar October

This is the calendar of October. The overview for the 12th is to show that all of my research and planning has been completed. The prezzi is to show the location recce. This helps in showing my decisions as to why I have chose to do them. The reason that I have chosen to show regional and national magazines is so that it can show the differentiation between the two. The mood board shows what my target wants and also likes. The reader profile shows the results that I got from the research that I received from the questionnaires that I sent out. The audience profile allows me to see what a small section of my audience likes/dislikes. The competition allowed me to see what other magazines were out there and whether they were regional or national.

Target review 9.11.15

This is how far I have came with my article page. I still need to add certain aspects to it so that I can give it to my teacher to mark and give feedback.

target 11.11.15

Today I want to carry on with my article and try and start my contents page.

Target 09.11.15

Today I want to carry on with my article.

Review 04.11.15

Today I have started to do my magazine. I had to change my plan because the photo I had taken was not suitable for my from cover so I have changed to using that for my feature page.

Target 4.11.15

Today I need to change my image form using it on the from cover to using it as a feature.

Review 02.11.15

I have started my front cover.

02.11.15 Target

Today I want to start my magazine construction and to have my main image chosen and put onto the front cover.

Target Audience research overall

By doing my target audience research it has allowed me to fully understand my audience and how I want to layout my magazine. Before I did my target research I did not know what colours I wanted to go for, I had a brief idea but with the feedback from my research I now know what I colours I need to use. Also I now know which way to best layout my pages and where to put images and text. Overall by doing target audience research it has allowed me to understand just what my audience will want instead of what national audiences want.

Competition

In the North East of England there is not that many regional baking magazines. When I was doing my research I found that there was local magazines with feature recipes in but the only baking magazine that I have found on a regular basis is from supermarkets. The way in which I will compete with my competitors is by actually putting in the features that my target audience wants. When doing my extensive research into what my audience wants I felt as though I got a good understanding of what to do and what not to do. However there is national magazines to take into account and I wanted to price my magazine around the £3-£4 mark so that it is just under the national average but it is just above the regional average. I do also have to take into account that I have billboard and website for my magazine so I have to look at other websites and billboard so that I can get it correct.

Research into target audience

This is the questions that I asked on my survey.The reason that I created a survey was so that I could get a better understanding of what my audience wants in the magazine.

Audience profiles

These are my reader profiles. The reason that I have done this is to show just what my audience likes to do and what their interests are in relation to what I need to put in my magazine. The reason why they would buy my magazine is because they all have an interest in baking and my magazine is based upon that topic. Plus they like following recipes and my magazine will have a range of recipes in. The reason that they may not like to read my magazine wise because they might not like to read magazines in contrast to recipe books. People may to buy my magazine because they may have no interest in baking or they might buy it because they want to get into baking or already have a passion/ interest in it.

Reader profile

This is my reader profile that I have created to show what the readers of my magazine like and what type of music that they listen to and what influences they have. The reason that I got people to fill in my survey was so that I can get the best understanding of my audience as i can so that my magazine will cater for them to the best quality.The reason that I have chosen to use the blue colours is because that is one of the colours i want to put into my magazine. When doing my research I had to change the colour of my initial idea. This is due to the feedback that I received. The design aspect stayed practically the same in relation to my research as the majority of the feedback that I got was in favor of my design aspects.

Mood board

This is my moodboard that I have created to show what my audience has interest in and what they like. The reason I have done this is to show that I know just what my audience wants and how I will appeal to them in my magazine. It is based around baking magazines in the UK and what my audience will hopefully like. The reason I have given these examples of magazines and colours is because this is what my magazine is going to be based upon when I create it. I have added brands and people of interest in the baking world for example The Great British Bake Off and Good Food magazine. The images of kitchen have been added as I want to add a feature on what people bakke in their house.

Overview 19.10.15

I have completed majority of my research and planning I now just need to complete my reader profile.

Target 19.10.15

Today I want to complete my research and planning.

Regional and national magazines

The difference between regional and national magazines are that one will focus more on wider range of recipes whereas regional recipes will focus on events that will happen around that area. This will help me because I now know that I do not need to add a lot of content when it comes to recipes as I can focus on one main one.

Reflection 14.10.15

I have nearly finished my research and planning.

Location Scout

14.10.15

Today I need to get as much of my research and planning complete.

Overview 12.10.15

Today I have achieved my target of updating my blog. I need to carry on with my research and planning work.

Target 12.10.15

Today I want to update my blog and make sure that I am getting close to completing my research and planning that has to be completed by the 23rd of October.

September time management overview.

This is a calendar of September, within this month I set myself target to reach throughout the month so that I could keep to deadlines. On Wednesday the 16th I had a deadline for my pitch to be ready to present to the rest of the class. This was completed on the day and presented to the class. Also deconstructions needed to be completed by that date and added to my blog in a presentational device. On Monday 21st September we started our target audience research. We created a face showing our primary and secondary target audience. We also had to create our target audience interview that had to be uploaded by the 30th September.